The Withering Vine
THE WITHERING VINE is a YA literary historical novel set in the Middle Ages. Below is the first page--enjoy!
Cote-d'Or,
France. The Fourteenth Century.
Chapter
One
One
of the disadvantages of being raised on the streets is that one's
conscience develops with a sort of delay.
A normal girl of sixteen years, I suppose, would be warned by her
healthy, homegrown conscience to stop and think before she falls into
sin. I, on the other hand, don't merely fall, but plunge right into
the depths with no alarm sounding at all.
'Tis
not the sound of my conscience, but Colette's screams which cascade
down from the little cottage on the hill behind me. Her cry of
“Antoine, you fool!” echoes about the valley until the rows of
vines and tilled soil absorb the sound. But this is usual. If the old
woman were to stop yelling at her husband that would be a
thing worth noticing.
The
vines themselves only whisper at me, in a kind way, as the early
morning wind passes through them on its way to the village. The vines
are all kind to me, no matter what I do. Well, almost all.
There
is one vine that must hate me now as much as I've hated it. It stares
at me in this moment, shriveled and shrunken, from my disobedient
hand. The twists of its dead tendrils form a mocking smile. The gap
in the row yawns at me and the hole in the earth seems ready to suck
me in to take the vine's place.
Oh,
I should have known better. I've grown up hearing the saying that no
sin goes unpunished—I get a sinking feeling, wondering what the
consequences of this action will be. But it irked me so, the thought
that this dead thing should have a home when I was about to lose
mine. I didn't think. I never think.
Now,
after I've already done the worst, of course, my conscience
won't stop its worthless little tongue: “Genevieve, you fool,
you know Antoine told you never to go near that vine!”
I
shake some dirt from my hands and the crumbling roots. “But it
makes no sense! Besides, maybe Antoine was merely in one of his
moods,” I argue.
“Maybe
he'll throw you out for sure now.”
What a great way to begin a tale... and what great, intriguing ending words, leaving the taste of the next chapters on the tongue of the readers, without revealing exactly what flavor until we read more!
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